Appealing to emotions is the most
powerful way to transfer learning in an
information cluttered training or
presentation. A compelling story woven
with a lot of information in the
telling with a conclusion that appeals
to the emotion can permanently etch the
learning in an otherwise unresponsive
training or meeting fatigued audience.
Right from childhood the best learning
we have had has taken place through
grandma tales, or reading stories
through books or stories narrated to us
in schools and by friends. We remember
them better than the thousands of
lectures and classes we have attended.
So what are the elements of a powerful
story and how does it work.
A story is woven around a situation
You need an interesting situation where
the protagonist is up against seemingly
insurmountable odds. The story should
leave out mundane details of what our
heroes dress or the chronology and
focus solely on the situation he is
confronted with, which throws his life
out of balance. The focus should be
on the emotional elements, the struggle
and stratagem to overcome the adversity
and how he wins in the end. Don’t we
all like the prince to fight the dragon
and carry away the princess and live
happily ever afterwards.
The situation need not always be good
against evil or win vs. lose. They
could be funny, humorous, tragic,
situational, or just a corporate
incident. It only needs to be infused
with the right emotion.
Establish the situation quickly
If it takes ages for you to come to the
point, you have lost the audience. The
situation must be established in the
first minute. Remember you are not
writing for a magazine or a blockbuster
novel. You are narrating to a live
audience already on the borderlines of
boredom. If you do not kindle their
interest immediately you would have
pushed them over the edge with negative
consequences.
Bring emotion into your own
presentation.
The story must be narrated with all
emotion and drama. If you drone on in
a flat monotone howsoever powerful the
story might be the impact is lost.
Bring variation with voice pitch, right
pauses and modulation. The right
pauses should make your audience hang
on to every word with anticipation and
excitement.
Be creative
Telling the right story to the right
audience at the right moment is the
key. Don’t tell a story just for
variation or a little diversion. Plan
your presentation and design the story
creatively to drive home the message.
This perhaps is the difference between
an excellent trainer and an average
one. The top trainers plan their
stories and weave it perfectly into the
presentation. The average trainers
know a lot of stories and tell one
whenever he feels the audience is bored
without creating the desired impact.
The story becomes more of a filler than
a powerful tool.
The Closing
The closing is the key to create
impact. If you go into lengthy
explanations about the morale the
impact may be lost. Leave it with a
dramatic end leaving the audience to
come to their own inferences. Right
from a child of a few years humankind
is bestowed with a brilliant and
interpretative mind and they come to
the right conclusions. The best way to
close is with a bit of mystery or a one
line explanation leaving the lessons to
sink in.
Here’s an illustrative story with most
of the elements described.
The Story of the Fierce Giant
once upon a time in a land far away,
there lived an enormous giant. He was
at least ten feet tall, with a mop of
red hair and a beard, and in his hand
he carried a mighty axe.
Every year on the same day, at the same
time, the giant would walk down from
the mountains which were his home , to
stand outside the castle walls,
terrorizing the inhabitants.
‘Come send me your bravest man, and I
will fight him,’ the giant would shout,
towering over the wall and waving his
axe menacingly. ‘Send me someone to
fight ,or I will knock down your castle
walls and kill everyone with my axe.’
And every year, the gate in the castle
wall would open slowly and fearfully,
and one poor, valiant soul would walk
out to Face the foe and certain death.
‘Is this the best you can do?’ the
giant would laugh mockingly. The poor
wretch would stand, mesmerized by the
enormity of the giant and the task in
hand. Not one person had even managed
to draw his sword, before the giant
would crush him with his mighty fist,
and chop them into tiny pieces with his
axe.
But then one day, a young prince
arrived in the town. ‘Why does
everyone here look so frightened and
sad?’ he asked a fellow traveler.
‘You haven't seen the giant yet,’
replied the traveler.
‘What giant?’ asked the young prince,
intrigued.
The traveler told him the tale.
‘Every year, on this very day, the
giant arrives and challenges our
bravest to a duel. And every year, he
slays them exactly where they stand.
They don’t even move or draw their
swords. It’s as though the giant
hypnotizes them.’
‘We’ll see about that.’ Said the young
prince
When the giant arrived later that day,
he was waiting for him.
‘Come send me your bravest man, and I
will fight him,’ the giant shouted.
‘I am here,’ said the young prince,
throwing open the gate and striding out
towards him.
For a moment they stood and faced each
other. Although he was still a long
way from him, the young prince was
instantly struck by the sheer size and
shocking appearance of his opponent.
But summoning up all his courage, he
started to walk towards the giant,
brandishing his sword, and never taking
his eyes off that dreadful face with
the red hair and the red beard.
Suddenly he realized that as he was
walking, the giant-rather than
appearing larger actually began to
shrink before his very eyes. He
stopped and stared. The giant was only
five feet tall.
He walked closer to him still then
stopped and stared. Now the giant was
only two feet tall. He continued
walking until he was face to face with
the giant, and each step he took , he
saw the giant shrink. By now the giant
was so small, that he looked up at the
young prince . He was only 12 inches
tall.
The young prince took his sword, and
plunged it into the giant ‘s heart.
As the giant lay dying on the ground ,
the young prince bent down and
whispered to him, ‘who are you ?’
With his dyeing breath , the giant
replied, ‘My name is Fear.’
The aim of all presentation and
training is to bring about change.
There is no better method of creating
at least the acceptance of the idea of
change than a dramatic powerful story
told well.